WRONG ROOMS: Critique by Andrew Hodges: An 'Intelligent' Review of the Wrong Rooms Microfiction (screengrabs)

First, a Facebook app notification (which he deleted):

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Then a text message from Facebook:

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Then an email from Facebook!

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Finally, a brief exchange of text messages between Andrew & I:

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There's a lot more I could post...

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PS. In *less than* 24 hours, around 900 people *chose* to read my first short story, and with around 100 new readers every day, I'm eternally grateful to them all. It might not be that good, but a lot of people are enjoying it.